Initial Photography

These photo's were the originalss I had taken for my first draft of my magazine.

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Rough Cut Feedback

Feedback was given from our teachers and peers to help improve our work.

Likes:

·        Picture concept of beach

·        Text styles

·        Good use of editing

·        Clear style model

·        Continued colour theme

Dislikes:

·        Some pictures needed to be sharper.

·        Styling of some of the models

·        More text on double page spread

How it could be improved:

·        Perhaps incorporate more blue onto the contents page

·        Retake the pictures and create more scenes like the beach instead of the plain white screen

·        Make the barcode more realistic

·        More quotes on the double page spread

·        Perhaps use two fonts and colours for Q&A

·        Put a price on the front page

·        Lighting on pictures needs to be improved

New Pictures

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